Yahshua's Wind

[Filidh]

Just a short poem I came up with. Nothing special, but hopefully someone gets a kick out of it.
It's pronounced as stress-nonstress-stress-nonstress.... with 8 syllables per line.
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Ancient winds across the deapseas
Sing a melody in union
Breathing wisdom o'er the planet
Know the voice of Father Yahweh
Hear Him in the southern deserts
And the valleys in the mountains
'Cross the creeks and streams of clearblue
Echoing thruout the goldplains
His love will we keep forever
We, His Folk, will serve Him always
Endless wellspring of love's healing
Tree of life that's evergiving
Living lovely flowing waters
Wash away all tears and sorrow
Hail Prince Yahshua of our life-tree
Once and future King forever

[Acrimonious]

Very serene; I like it.

[Nayto]

I like it as well, thanks Filidh. Feel free to write more